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Thread: (not for kids) Death train - a horror story

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    (not for kids) Death train - a horror story

    If you are scared fast, don't read it.

    Death train:
    In rural Wisconsin, there is an old abandoned park. Built in the 1920s, it served as the town’s gathering place for everyone.

    That is, until a newly developed Train and Tunnel for Tots™ ride was installed in 1932. It was an innocent looking childish train, with one main (mechanized) head car, with three small trolleys pulled behind it. It went around some loops before going into a small tunnel.

    But this is where the story gets weird. There were numerous cases of child deaths that year, all of them happening after the child rode on that train system. Some kids went missing in that short tunnel (about ten feet), and others went comatose after leaving. One, upon exiting, was found to be dead. Her dress was covered in what looked like small bloody handprints. Some killed themselves by scratching at their throats until they bled out, and one of them even killed another child before hanging herself with razor wire at the family’s farm.

    The park was closed, and the town’s popularity as a tourist town plummeted.

    Recently, a team of scientists were sent out to the park. They taped a video camera to the train, and put a new intern in with it, before sending it on its way onto the tracks.

    When the train left the tunnel, it was empty, except for the camera.

    The last ten seconds were nothing but static, save for the sound of children laughing.


    THE END???

    Should I post another horror story?
    Was it scary?

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    dude that is freeeaky..... dont post another one!! i dont like scary things.....

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    Cat there are a lot of kids here. Watch out.

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Necro King View Post
    Cat there are a lot of kids here. Watch out.
    At the thread 'how old is the SE player' 90% of the people were more then 14 years old...

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Necro King View Post
    Cat there are a lot of kids here. Watch out.
    Who is cat? And can you vote the poll?
    PS: I looooooooove horror movies in that style haha

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    Quote Originally Posted by cantavanda View Post
    At the thread 'how old is the SE player' 90% of the people were more then 14 years old...
    Little kids lie about there age. But this is a cartoon graphical game. A lot of kids play it and go to the forums for help. And you're cat.

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    im not actually scared im 13 but the bit with the small bloody handprints were FREAKY...

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    Quote Originally Posted by cantavanda View Post
    If you are scared fast, don't read it.

    Death train:
    In rural Wisconsin, there is an old abandoned park. Built in the 1920s, it served as the town’s gathering place for everyone.

    That is, until a newly developed Train and Tunnel for Tots™ ride was installed in 1932. It was an innocent looking childish train, with one main (mechanized) head car, with three small trolleys pulled behind it. It went around some loops before going into a small tunnel.

    But this is where the story gets weird. There were numerous cases of child deaths that year, all of them happening after the child rode on that train system. Some kids went missing in that short tunnel (about ten feet), and others went comatose after leaving. One, upon exiting, was found to be dead. Her dress was covered in what looked like small bloody handprints. Some killed themselves by scratching at their throats until they bled out, and one of them even killed another child before hanging herself with razor wire at the family’s farm.

    The park was closed, and the town’s popularity as a tourist town plummeted.

    Recently, a team of scientists were sent out to the park. They taped a video camera to the train, and put a new intern in with it, before sending it on its way onto the tracks.

    When the train left the tunnel, it was empty, except for the camera.

    The last ten seconds were nothing but static, save for the sound of children laughing.


    THE END???

    Should I post another horror story?
    Was it scary?

    Not bad .

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    not really scary to be honest.... but its alright... write another one

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    Kind of scary do you want to hear my one?

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    Anyway this is my story

    Man checks into hotel receptioness tells him not to go inside room 427 the women tells him a girl with red eyes and a white dress haunt that room the next day the man looks threw the key hole and all he can see is red... mwahaha

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    Well, I'm not in USA...

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    Quote Originally Posted by garuda View Post
    Well, I'm not in USA...
    Are you talking to me?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Michael-H View Post
    k .
    Congrats on 7,000th post

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    I made a second one, third one coming. Le me think about something scary...

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    Quote Originally Posted by sea horse View Post
    anyway this is my story

    man checks into hotel receptioness tells him not to go inside room 427 the women tells him a girl with red eyes and a white dress haunt that room the next day the man looks threw the key hole and all he can see is red... Mwahaha
    lol .

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    Quote Originally Posted by cantavanda View Post
    lol .
    Do you get it the red eyes lol

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    That was scary, thanks alot Canta!!!
    It's good to be back!

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    The story is SO a copy of The Midnight Palace, by Carlos Ruiz Zafón.
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    not scary -_-
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    Don't revive old topics idiot
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    No stop posting here this is a dead topic
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    Quote Originally Posted by cantavanda View Post
    No stop posting here this is a dead topic
    You have to, let's scare trolls and little children(Im just kidding about the childrens part)
    It's good to be back!

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